A client suggested this for ad copy:
I suggested they change "We offer" to "Get":
… or just remove “We offer” completely:
Make sentences punchier
- We offer everything your home office needs under one roof.
- We offer a free next day contactless delivery throughout Ireland.
I suggested they change "We offer" to "Get":
- Get everything your home office needs under one roof.
- Get free next day contactless delivery throughout Ireland.
… or just remove “We offer” completely:
- Everything your home office needs under one roof.
- Free next day contactless...
Make sentences punchier
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